Learning Intention: I can use descriptive langue and phrases that create strong images in the readers mind.
Willow and Logan found themselves trapped in a dark mysterious castle. They wandered through the dimly lit hallways looking for a way out. About the ninth room they entered the door crashed shut behind them. They noticed something in the corner so they went to go investigate. It was a painting easel and every color of paint you could ever imagine. Willow and Logan each snatched a paint brush and began to paint their magnificent masterpiece. The brilliant colors they used flowed onto the canvas. Working as a team created a maroon colored dragon with red beady eyes and a charcoaled mint body.
This is my 100 Word Challenge for Week #15. I have really enjoyed doing 100 Word Challenges. I also have learned lot's. I have learned how to make a descriptive storie also using similes in my stories. I have improved lot's since the beging in the beging my stories did not really make any sence they would go from one thing to another. So I am really proud of where I have gon in my writting.
Willow and Logan found themselves trapped in a dark mysterious castle. They wandered through the dimly lit hallways looking for a way out. About the ninth room they entered the door crashed shut behind them. They noticed something in the corner so they went to go investigate. It was a painting easel and every color of paint you could ever imagine. Willow and Logan each snatched a paint brush and began to paint their magnificent masterpiece. The brilliant colors they used flowed onto the canvas. Working as a team created a maroon colored dragon with red beady eyes and a charcoaled mint body.
This is my 100 Word Challenge for Week #15. I have really enjoyed doing 100 Word Challenges. I also have learned lot's. I have learned how to make a descriptive storie also using similes in my stories. I have improved lot's since the beging in the beging my stories did not really make any sence they would go from one thing to another. So I am really proud of where I have gon in my writting.