Learning Intention: I can use descriptive langue and phrases that create strong images in the readers mind.
We approched the haunted house that no one has ever entered. All we could see was glissening, blurry white right in front of us. We tiptoed onto the porch as it made an earsplitting crack. We opened the door, BAM! The door slammed shut. Then, we heard a rattling sound. We both were shaking as fast as a heart beats. Then we saw something slithering across the floor in front of us. It had eyes beaming a maroon red. It came slithering towards us so we screamed. We ran out of the house in a flash
This is my 100 word challenge. A 100 word challenge is when you get a topic and you have to write about that topic only in 100 words. It does not have to be a beginning and then an end of the story it can be any part that you want of the story. So this 100 word challenge that I'm showing you right now, the topic is you are in a haunted house and you have to describe an animal. I have been working on using similes and descriptive words in my writing and changing the sentences lengths.
We approched the haunted house that no one has ever entered. All we could see was glissening, blurry white right in front of us. We tiptoed onto the porch as it made an earsplitting crack. We opened the door, BAM! The door slammed shut. Then, we heard a rattling sound. We both were shaking as fast as a heart beats. Then we saw something slithering across the floor in front of us. It had eyes beaming a maroon red. It came slithering towards us so we screamed. We ran out of the house in a flash
This is my 100 word challenge. A 100 word challenge is when you get a topic and you have to write about that topic only in 100 words. It does not have to be a beginning and then an end of the story it can be any part that you want of the story. So this 100 word challenge that I'm showing you right now, the topic is you are in a haunted house and you have to describe an animal. I have been working on using similes and descriptive words in my writing and changing the sentences lengths.